I got to tell you, this is one of the BEST, if not The BEST Tomione story I have ever read! The plot, the weaving of the tale...it's just perfect! You are an amazing author and I hope you would continue this wonderful tale. It would be such a shame to see this go uncontinued. I will be patiently and eagerly waiting for your next update, no matter when you update!Reviewer: smos Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2012 - 09:39 am
I love your story, but the only thing I have to disagree with - a completely stupid comment, but I must voice my opinion....
How are we supposed to grow up sooner than we were in the past? Much of the time children were considered adults in their early teens, forgoing education and starting families/getting jobs. I cannot figure out how you come to that conclusion.
On the other hand, for the purpose of this story, I DO think the Expecto Patronum spell would have been moved to an earlier year mainly because of the Wizard Wars. Why teach children something later when you can move it forward and teach them an even vaster arsenal of defense spells? It makes sense that eduction would advance it's DADA program with all the Dark Wizards popping up.
Anyways, I'm excited to read more of this and see further interaction between Tom and Hermione - especially to see how she got so far back into the past in the first place, and what her actual go in being there is.
Reviewer: emeraldoni Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2011 - 04:38 pm
This story is incredibly well written, and I can't wait to read more! In fact, I implore you to update as quickly as you possibly can. It's very difficult to find well written stories of this pairing, which is the main reason I am on this site anyway. I believe that you have the personalities of all the canon character's you mention in the story perfected, given the little bit of information we do know on certain pairs of them. I have to say that I adore Abraxas. I'd love to see Tom incorporated more, and I can't wait to see where you take this!Reviewer: enchantedquills11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2011 - 08:53 pm
Hello Svelty Rose!
My dearest, your stories are certainly becoming an adiciton of mine. Can't begin to put in words my grattitude for your writting.
However... would you pleaaaase (pretty please, with chocolate on top), consider at least finishing this one???.
Whether you decide to do so or not, I will say I really had fun reading this one (and I'm still wondering how did Hermione, get there?, WHAT exactly happened after the Death Eathers captured her on the "present" time??? AND what would happen bettween her and Cygnus? or bettween her and Alphard?better yet, Wait! no! bettween HER and TOM?!? Oh c'mon, please update... *pouts*)
Cheers! You're lovely -as your writting is too- !
~ kay dalle ~
* If I graded it as "8" is only because it's unfinished...
** and maybe because I had a little problem distinguishing all of the characters (specially the Blacks, at first) only for thier color's eyes...
Author's Response: <-- Has h00ge obsession with eyes. In all seriousness, those will be revealed in later chapters and I know, I know, I will get around to updating this. I'm working on the next chapter right now but since my muse is *not* cooperating, I am have a difficult time completing it. No probably starting it and then scrapping it though. Hmmm... Reviewer: kay_dalle Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/09/2009 - 06:07 pm
I ADORE this story! I can't wait for more!! It's so entertaining and I can't wait to see what Hermione will do! How did she go back in time?! I get the feeling that she's repressing everything and then at one point everything is going to explode...her magic will shoot through the roof and then Tom is going to be REALLY interested in her...i really like how you made the Tom Riddle caracter. I really can't wait for the update!!:) 10 on 10 awesome story!!Reviewer: marieve Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/12/2008 - 12:52 pm
You're doing an amazing job! I love the way you portraied Hermione (the layering of her emotions is superb and moving!), but most of all I love the way you slowly revealed Hogwarts's universe as it was before the first war and how you've made each charachter come to life (Alphard <3)! While reading your story I got more and more curious about a part of the HP timeline that is just barely explored by J.K.Rowling, but which is actually the beginning of everything! I really can't wait to learn more about each charachter's personal story, about their feelings and secret intentions and in particular, to see how you're going to develop Tom's charachter and (obliviously XD) his relationship with Hermione! Right now I'm totally fascinated by everything you wrote!
I hope you're going to update soon this lovely and beautiful story!!!
SmallLadyChihiroReviewer: SmallLadyChihiro Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/11/2008 - 09:07 am
Really enjoying this so far!
I like her dreams/flashbacks, and how they sometimes reflect what's going on in Hera's timeline while giving glimpses of how Hermione got to be the way she is and there in the first place. Almost not sure what I'm most eager to learn about next: her memories or her current issues. ^_^
Of the many questions I have... I can't help but wonder if Tom did something to her necklace before he gave it back, and if he purposefully took it in the first place (so he could return it to her, possibly being tipped off by her roommate that it was especially important to her)...Reviewer: aura Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 10:03 am