Awww. That's so sweet. If you decide to write more I'd definitely read it!
Reviewer: TreeGoddess Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/03/2012 - 08:36 pm
I'm in tears now, that was just beautiful!
Author's Response: *passes tissue*
[Report This]Date: 03/12/2008 - 10:44 am
Thanks for not killing off Draco! Don't apologize for lack of smut - the romance and sentiment was lovely in itself.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2008 - 10:55 am
I'll take good romance over smut any day! Thanks for the lovely little story.
Author's Response: You're very welcome!
[Report This]Date: 06/08/2008 - 05:37 pm
love it it is sweet
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 14/07/2008 - 02:47 am
this was adorable
Author's Response: :D
Date: 29/06/2008 - 02:41 pm
::crying:: It is sweet to see a family reunited, a father meeting his child for the first time, being called Daddy for the first time, and finding love or having a chance to fall in love--all very sweet. ;~)
Author's Response: Yeah, a bit OOC for me! lmao
[Report This]Date: 05/05/2008 - 01:35 am
aww short but sweet i liked it
Author's Response: TY hon
[Report This]Date: 24/04/2008 - 04:59 am
That was wonderful! I'm so happy Draco's alive and Hermione saved him, and forgiven him. *sniffle* It was beautiful! Their daughter is the cutest thing ever... I just love happy endings!
Author's Response: I had so much fun writing her. Glad you enjoyed it! Reviewer: Lea1286 Signed
[Report This]Date: 16/04/2008 - 10:23 pm
Absolutely loved this story. This is one of the best one-shots I've ever read. This is an apt ending to your first story. I'm glad I found your story in this site.
Hey, just a suggestion with your one-shots "Does She Know" and "Does She Care", could you possibly make it in to a whole story not just a one-shot. This is a really good story that I really believe that a lot of people will like. I know I would.
If not, that's just fine. I know looking at your other stories you really like the Hermione/ Lupin pairing. Haven't read some of them yet, but just from reading your one shots you are a really good writer.
Hope you like my review, and keep on writing. : )
Author's Response: I LOVE your review--thank you so much! You're not the first to mention that this shoudl be a complete story, but the muse hasn't suggested it yet. I'm sort of off Dramione's because I've read some really bad ones lately, so I'll wait a while and see what happens there. I do love Remus, but most of my upcoming stories are Moony stories (a bit different). I have Lucius (Filthy Little Mudblood), Harry, and Sirius as well. I like to think I write a variety, even though Moony has my heart! lol Darkest Desires!
Author's Response: I LOVE your review--thank you so much! You're not the first to mention that this shoudl be a complete story, but the muse hasn't suggested it yet. I'm sort of off Dramione's because I've read some really bad ones lately, so I'll wait a while and see what happens there. I do love Remus, but most of my upcoming stories are Moony stories (a bit different). I have Lucius (Filthy Little Mudblood), Harry, and Sirius as well. I like to think I write a variety, even though Moony has my heart! lol Darkest Desires! Reviewer: shinigamioni Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/04/2008 - 08:38 pm
This was a nice little story. I liked Draco's slow transition from dream state to fully awake and how his knowledge of the world around him seemed to grow along with his consciousness. Although I didn't realize this was a sequel, haha.
Reviewer: worldsapart Signed [Report This]Date: 26/02/2008 - 10:26 pm
god....you made me cry...it was a wonderful, fantastic story
Reviewer: lou Signed [Report This]Date: 25/02/2008 - 04:44 am
I liked the first,and I loved the sequel. Thanks for sharing!! :D
Reviewer: satinwich Signed [Report This]Date: 16/02/2008 - 09:41 pm
Who cares if it was lacking smut? It was a touching, beautiful piece that was well written. You can do smut later, for now let the readers enjoy a little tenderness and love. Good work.
Reviewer: mariteri Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/2008 - 12:54 am
Oh this was "heartwarming". I know that's not a word usually you probably want to hear about your stories.....but I loved it!! I so want more from Draco/Hermione in this story format! I also want to see more from Kef! She was so darling! You are such a great writer & I enjoy reading your stories! Thanks.
Reviewer: ssdawn Signed [Report This]Date: 13/01/2008 - 11:29 pm
awww, that was so adorable!!!
Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed [Report This]Date: 04/01/2008 - 12:57 am
I love it! Thanks for sharing such a lovely story with us.
Reviewer: velvetblack Signed [Report This]Date: 24/12/2007 - 01:29 pm
God! That last sentence completely did me in. Here come those sappy little tears... thanks a lot *chucks pillow at you*.
lol <3
Reviewer: sweetietart Signed [Report This]Date: 17/12/2007 - 04:05 pm
FUNNY! FUNNY! FUNNY! FUNNY! FUNNY! FUNNY! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!
[Report This]Date: 11/12/2007 - 05:40 pm
magnificent, both this and the first oneshot.
Author's Response: TY very much :D
Date: 07/12/2007 - 03:39 pm
this made me tear up. perhaps more additions to this fic? maybe some smut.... *eye wiggles*
Author's Response: lmao---I'm becoming typecast into the 'smut writer' and I should be offended, but I'm not!! A bit of smut never hurts I thinK!
[Report This]Date: 15/11/2007 - 07:35 pm
Epilogue? Isn't the best review you can get be one that BEGS for more? This and the prequel were so haunting, sad, desperate and beautiful and this piece had that magnificent hopeful twist. Wonderfully done. So again, I ask, Epilogue?
Author's Response: thank you so much (you're very talented yourself!!!!). I'm not really thinking epilouge here, but you never know in the future. :D
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2007 - 01:09 pm
Beautiful, I don't see why you should put smut here - it's simply sweet and ok like this. I don't like smut thrown in just because the author feels that the readers would prefer to read it: sometimes it's just annoyingly useless. Better, MUCH better, a oneshot full of good emotions like this one. :-)
Any plans of a third oneshot with Hermione, Draco and Keffie?
Reviewer: miciabirba Signed [Report This]Date: 26/10/2007 - 12:28 pm
I don't know why you're apologizing for the lack of smut! I love a good story where you actually get to see some emotion and maturity in Draco.
Reviewer: bookofsecrets Signed [Report This]Date: 10/10/2007 - 09:08 pm
I love it..though i guess I could've loved it just as endlessly if it was a 100 chapters! Lucius as Grandpa! Lovely!! And the little girl..just too cute! I just wanna hug all of tem-Lucius, Draco, Keffy....cute!
So now give me Sirius-for an overnight loan!
Reviewer: LuciannaMalfoy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/10/2007 - 10:36 am
thanks for the tears...
wish it was longer.
*sniffle*
Author's Response: sorry bout that! I hoped you liked it through your tears Reviewer: chyara Signed
[Report This]Date: 28/09/2007 - 07:23 am
Oh, loved that it was Lucius who told Hermione about Draco really saving her, and the girl was just adorable!
I would so love to read more, know if they can finally be together, but I won't say no to a smutty oneshot either :p
Now do I get a kiss from Sirius?? You promised!
Author's Response: A quick one---I told you, you greedy little girl, you have Snape, I get Sirius! lol... You love your smut! I love your smut, too, so go write! Reviewer: lilmisblack Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/09/2007 - 10:58 am
THIS WAS AMAIZNG I LOVED IT THNK U 4 DOIN A SEQUAL AMAZING O0O00O MYBE U CULD DO ANOTHA WON O0O0O PWEZ X X
Author's Response: Thanks to my AMAZING reviewers (whom I love to death!!). I'm considering doing something else with this story. But I have to finish Mudblood first--I've been threatened with haunting spirits and such! lol
Date: 26/09/2007 - 08:47 am
No that was beautiful and I would love to read more about Draco rebuilding his life with Hermione's help and Keffie's pushing. When you have lots of heart with a story, it makes up for smut. To be honest, stories that show character growth and a hopeful future are my favorites! I especially love authors that depict children as they are. I just think there is more story here for you to continue on. Draco's reintergration into their lives, his forgiveness of himself, earning her love as the changed man he is now, there are so many possibilities ... secretly, I think I just want to read more about Daddy!Draco and Granddaddy!Lucius. :) Well done!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! I actually mirrored Keffie after my own daughter and her tendencies to talk nonstop at that age. I'm not sure how Lucius crept into the story, (Mudblood probably) but once he was in there, I feel in love with that character and had to have a Draco-Lucius moment, along with him being Grandpa. I might think about redoing all of this into one long fic when my others are finished (thanks only to reviews like yours) :D
[Report This]Date: 25/09/2007 - 11:36 pm
Beautiful!
Author's Response: TY :D
[Report This]Date: 25/09/2007 - 10:19 pm