ahhh! i thoght for sure i had read that i a few new chapters to read, not just one. but damn was that good.
i totally dont know what the last actions of tom means for them but boy would i like to know, even a bit, soon.
as always, great work.
Author's Response: Tom always has something up his sleeve. ;) Reviewer: genrou Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/11/2008 - 03:32 pm
oooooh you updated! i am so pleased, i must admit i had begun to lose faith in your ever updating again, so shame on me :( im sorry to hear about your grandpa and i hope your friend is feeling better and it wasnt to serious. Excellent chapter as always :)Reviewer: baiseyboo Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2008 - 02:21 pm
Oh my goodness, this is a good fic. I especially love the direction it's taking, with the shifting balance between the characters. I can see Tom losing a bit more of his human mentality and rationality, while Hermione regains some of hers, once she's realized that a great deal of her emotions towards Tom is due to a love-potion (I really love how you're portraying, Hermione, especially in this chapter! Gryffindorishly brave, strong, and loyal, but with a mind that's cool and logical enough to use these emotions effectively). I think it's really neat how Tom and Hermione have shifted in opposite directions on this scale of being human/rational, but that the power-differential between them is still steady, since they've both become more dangerous to each other in doing so. So interesting to read! I also love how you've balanced the mood of this fic - dark and unsettling, but not so dark that it's hard to read. I'm babbling now, but it's just because I love so much about this fic. I can't wait to see how everything plays out : DReviewer: Ivihaer Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/06/2008 - 05:28 am
ooooo, alas no more chapters for me. hopefully there will be some soon.
and just how much will she go to dumbledore with? just enough to taunt riddle and scare him? or more so if it seems shes stuck there.
and now that tr has even less hmanity im sure that would tie hg even less. i do wonder how the loss of her will affect the DEs. and i wonder if tr and hg will still continue to play their relationship in public.
and apparently the expected imperio, just what will that yield?Reviewer: genrou Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/04/2008 - 03:10 pm
i wonder what kind of uproar would have occured if hg entered the slytherin dorms with an unconcius riddle?
i do wonder how involved will dumbledore get? i wonder what he thinks is going on and what threat is hg if she was able to have tr unconscious and very ill with something unknown. i wonder will he get to use legitimenus on her?
ah love potion. well that certainally gives more oomph than just a piece of his soul in her body. interesting.
and damn, if hg didnt beleive what this tom was capable of, im sure seeing the murder certainly did. and i wonder if being there for the making of a horocrux will affect her more as well especially with the use of her wand.
prior incantum ever gonig to come into play?
Good people were truly too easy to manipulate. well the road to hell is paved with good intentions.Reviewer: genrou Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/04/2008 - 02:31 pm
oh yes i forgot to mention. it was interesting that it was dolonov, the man who really first bested hg, was the first one to get the dark mark. i wonder if tom will ever get to see that memory.Reviewer: genrou Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/04/2008 - 01:21 pm
theres nothing like a vomiting girl in fiction to make oyu think pregnant.
and ooo well tom definately seems to be at oods with his feelings and her beign a muggleborn. though it looks like the former is winning out.
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Date: 16/04/2008 - 01:15 pm
oooo, i beleive now weve seen the three halllows (wait did we see the cloak?)
and i wonder how the knowlede of hg eing a muggleborn will affect tom and his plans.
and ad called hg hermione in front of tom. did hwe know tom knew or will he think now that he didnt react?Reviewer: genrou Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/04/2008 - 12:35 pm
oooooo, love the story so far. sorry for not commenting earlier but it was quite late at night and i was snuggled to far in my bed and didnt want to stop reading. however it just got so good i have to let some emotions be expressed.
so hermione is changing the future as we see here. and tr knows her name and she was destroying the horocruxes. nice. and shes getting deeper and deeper involved....^____^ right now im getting a flash of leoben from bsg in the flesh&bone episode. that same excitement at discovering the right things from an obsession.
oh i like how the DEs dont quite know what to think of the situation and are gossiping. i wonder how will that effect things.
oh and ron! glad to see how you are treating him. yes i know this is a tr/hg story but i like how ron isnt being written off- that oh she isnt really interested in him or he just died or what not. its more respectful , to the audience as well, to treat ron as you do. so im very glad for it. it of course makes things more interesting especially when tr gets so many glimpses of him.
thoguh question, the cup scene. its very much like the story hermione granger and the deathl hollows. is it coincidence, inspired or so i just not remeber details from the book?
but either way this story is incredible and i liked how in the end of this chapter the transference failed and thus the worry.
so very nice. oh and i like how hg does not give up her character and be so mesmorized by the dark arts easily.
very fine piece.Reviewer: genrou Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/04/2008 - 11:35 am
A few words for Tom Riddle (aka Lord Voldemort) from myself:
Haha Tom, she is in league with Dumbledore. Not quite in control of things like you had thought, huh? ;-P So now you have to pull a dirty and resort to using the Imperius curse on the poor girl--tsk, tsk, tsk. It really is a pity that you would have to stoop so low to gain the regard and loyalty that you wish, rather than going about it like a real man. ;-P Oh well, I guess you could say that breeding doesn't mean shit if you have crap for manners and or scruples. ;-PReviewer: Wistful_Stargazer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2008 - 06:01 pm