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Title: A Child Arrives

I can't seem to find you to chat through Facebook either since you aren't my friend. The story on quotev got removed and when you said that the copy on Miss Literati was a plagiairzed story off another plagiarized story, I thought that was the one you were talking about.

Reviewer: sarabeth120 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2013 - 09:50 pm

Title: A Child Arrives

Sorry about the double review, but I can't seem to private message you... I'm assuming you saw the one that was posted on quotev, right? I saw that one first and contacted them about it since I didn't know about your version orginally. At least they gave you credit for the story, unlike the person on Miss Literati.



Author's Response:

haven't found the one on quotev... do you have a link... you can IM me on facebook vara hrolfswiffe

Reviewer: sarabeth120 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2013 - 06:35 pm

Title: A Child Arrives

I just wanted to let you know that someone has plagiarized this story: http://www.missliterati.com/stories/the-malfoy-stranger-513d2c01c639da568702da46



Author's Response:

thank you, would you believe it's a palgerised version of a plagerised story!! grrrrrr

Reviewer: sarabeth120 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2013 - 03:25 pm

Title: A Child Arrives

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Kallie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2013 - 09:57 am

Title: Chapter 68

Looking forward to an update!!

Reviewer: janmci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/04/2013 - 02:26 pm

Title: Chapter 68

Amazing story, you must have put so much time and effort into creating it.

I do find Hermione very OOC in parts, but I have really enjoyed the story so far and look forward to reading more

Reviewer: kelbelz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/04/2013 - 11:16 pm

Title: Chapter 68

I absolutely love your work. Thank you so much for writing this its truly been a great I can't wait until the next chapters. I am curious on one person in particular of the lovely bunch, especially now that Sirius has started to court someone, I wonder about Regulus and what happens to him. Though truly thanks for this I can't wait.



Author's Response:

the story is up in its entirity on The Manor and I will update as soon as get any back from the beta... and yes there is someone for Regulus...

Reviewer: Nyxto Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2013 - 02:06 pm

Title: Chapter 68

plz plz write again soon ive reread this story three times cause i love it so much and cant wait for the next chapter all the best and happy st patricks day



Author's Response:

The whole story is up at Malfoy and on my own site... I am just waiting for the next chapter to be re-beta'd

thanks for the review

Reviewer: Gothiclove Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/03/2013 - 06:24 pm

Title: Chapter 68

Honey I miss reading our beautiful loved the chapter and hopefully looking forward to more, congratulations for another perfect chapter kisses.

Reviewer: Lady Cedrico Diggory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2013 - 12:07 pm

Title: Chapter 68

Poor Sirius; at least he finally convinced skittish Swan that he wasn't having her on. :)

I really enjoyed Ron's easy humor and repore with Severus (especially the body jarred for potions joke).

It's getting nearer and nearer to the bumper crop of babies! So exciting. :) Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: TreeGoddess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/01/2013 - 08:10 am

Title: Chapter 68

love love this story

I love the relationships and how they all interact.

I can't wait to read more, hope you will be updating soon

Reviewer: sirius34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2013 - 04:40 pm

Title: Chapter 68

My favorite part of pregnancy was the baby kicking.  I'd lay around for hours feeling her swim around.

Reviewer: Cpetrienm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2013 - 10:05 pm

Title: Chapter 68

Awe.... soooo cute!

Love the chapter, especially Ron's rant about pregnant women!

Can't wait for the next chapter!
-- Liz

Reviewer: calimocho Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2013 - 08:11 pm

Title: A Child Arrives

Sorry to hear that about your daughter. Life throws us heavy balls our way at times. Is she the one that barely got married? I hope she will keep on doing okay. 

 

Liz

Reviewer: alina290 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2013 - 03:02 pm

Title: Chapter 68

Good to have you back. How were your Holidays? I hope they were good. Thank you for this chapter. Watching Severus with his baby girl is wonderful. Sirius is getting whipped. Good to know that. I look forward to the next chapter.

 

Liz



Author's Response:

thank you for the review... Christmas was OK, it would have been better if I hadn't had to spend 2 1/2 weeks in a hospital 150 miles away after my daughter got airlifted there following a Road Accident... she's doing OK now, thank the Goddess..

 

the next chapter as soon as it is Beta'd

Reviewer: alina290 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2013 - 08:26 pm

Title: Chapter 68

Happy 2013.  As always I was delighted to read this lovely chapter.  Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: roon0 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2013 - 07:19 pm

Title: Chapter 68

awe big bad death eaters and a baby too cute for words

Reviewer: Mmwillow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2013 - 03:42 pm

Title: Chapter 67

Highly addictive story!  The mystical/magical traditions/histories/spell work are well researched and honour the olde ways a true credit to your writing!!!  Wonderful story!!

Reviewer: Mmwillow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2013 - 12:43 am

Title: Chapter 67

I love this story!  Can't wait til H has her baby.

Reviewer: Cpetrienm Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/12/2012 - 01:19 am

Title: Chapter 40

 

I know why Astoria and her mother being ‘banished,' to work for their keep, but why is Daphne being ‘banished' too?  From what I read, she had nothing to do with her families schemes.  In any case, this is a great story. Thanks for sharing it with everyone. 

 

Reviewer: kuro Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29/12/2012 - 11:01 am

Title: A Child Arrives

This is such a fabulous story. This a reread for me, but now I am heading over to Malfoy Manor to finish! Thank you for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: hkmclean Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/12/2012 - 12:09 am

Title: Chapter 67

Love love love this!! I had started reading this a while ago before it disappeared from GE. I'm thrilled that it's back and I read through to chapter 67 in one go! :) I love so much about this that I just can't single out one thing. Just promise me you won't stop updating this wonderful fic! :)



Author's Response:

I am updating as fast as Bunnyhops rebetas the story.. it wasn't up to the new standards... I am also busy with my original fics, which I post on my own site and on themaplebookshelf.com

 

thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: TreeGoddess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/09/2012 - 09:56 am

Title: Chapter 67

This story has kept me entranced for the last few days. I simply cannot wait for another update! I love all the thought and effort you've put into this, and all the tidbits about Wizarding customs and wow just the sheer depth of the story - I love it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. The story is posted in full, but with the 'old' editing on Malfoy Manor and on my own site.

I love weaving threads in and out of one another.. and love it when it is appreciated. More as soon as it is beta'd

Reviewer: fearlessvalkyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2012 - 03:50 pm

Title: Chapter 67

Looking forward to more!!!



Author's Response:

More as soon as I can... as Bunnyhops betas I post

Reviewer: janmci Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2012 - 05:28 pm

Title: Chapter 67

The many romances in this story make it one of a kind. And all the delightful attention to detail from Wizard law, to old customs, to special festivals. Truly delightful. The beautiful courtships of Draco and Hermione and Severus and Jean. Truly touch the heart. Also the love between the Malfoys for each other and their friends



Author's Response:

Thank you, I loved plotting and planning this one. The research took ages but was great fun....

Reviewer: iluvaqt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2012 - 12:10 am

Title: Chapter 67

Darling.... UPDATE! 



Author's Response:

as soon as Bunnyhops has beta'd the next chapters I will, with pleasure....

Reviewer: SSspinster Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2012 - 02:56 pm

Title: Chapter 67

Happy



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: janmci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/08/2012 - 07:44 pm

Title: Chapter 67

This is one chapter I was looking forward to reading this chapter again. Thank you. Sirius has been lowered to the level of a new born pup. Thank you.

 

Liz



Author's Response:

oh yes, following Swan around, begging for attention

Reviewer: alina290 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/08/2012 - 09:17 pm

Title: Chapter 67

Fantastic.  Really lovely! 



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: reader76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/08/2012 - 08:34 pm

Title: Chapter 66

great chapter and maybe sirius will have some happiness now



Author's Response:

Once he persuades Swan he's not teasing her... thank you for the review

Reviewer: waffenmac Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/08/2012 - 10:57 am

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