Awesome story

maybe even being a Prewitt or a Black or a Lupin would be possible maybe Lupin had a sister that was a squib who Voldie was hunting that sounds more my speed Remus as an Uncle to Hermione is good

I just loved this story I wish we could have seen the scene of Harry's disgrace but oh well I was giddy for my favorite snarky Snape! Thank you so very much for this wonderful tale!

WOW I am in awe and waiting for more.

Oh I love this story MistressMalfoy and of all the ones I have read where Severus is anything but her lover or husband it is by far my favorite...I have a plot bunny running in my head that involves Severus not being her father but knowing she is a pureblood like maybe a Malfoy in hiding for her own safety from Voldie minions maybe even Draco's twin and Severus falls in love with her...of course the Granger's would be squibs...does that sound like it has been done before and if you have seen it or know of it will you let me know so I can read it as I love Hermione/Severus stuff

Author's Response:

thank you so much for taking the time to not only read but review. I truly appreciate each and every one I receive xoxo In regards to your comments on Hermione. I love reading fics where Hermione is a pureblood and although I can't think of any off the top of my head, I think it should be given further consideration. I believe that Hermione as a Malfoy is a bit cliche and you can really explore you own writing limitations by choosing a character not often used as a 'father figure' Rodolphus Lestrange for example, perhaps she could have been secreted away to protect her from Bellatrix's wrath or even Rabastan - the younger lesser known brother. Or to widen the circle even more- you could look to other minor characters like Regulus Black, sent into hiding by DD after he impregnated someone, even Sirius Black or Remus could be potential father figures who are often overlooked :) Email me at mistressmalfoy@grangerenchanted.com if you decided to go ahead with it, I'd love to help out xox

Great story. I really like the way you weave your stories.

Love this...so moving...Sev does deserve happiness

I absolutly love this Mistress Malfoy!! I do wish it was longer but the plot was well written and I can't tarnish one thing about it. 

Love and respect 

Lady_malfoy

Interesting rituals and great plot. Enjoyed a lot!

I absolutely loved this story! Your Adrian in this was just delicious! His was seriously hot (his filthy mouth was just YUM! LoL.) and I loved the whole idea of the magic bonding - Him and Hermione being ‘mates'. All their interactions were full of intense passion (they had such great chemistry) and I *loved* that their first time together was in Severus' garden. *giggles* A perfect place :-) I felt bad for poor Bill though :( His and Hermione's interactions were pretty damn HOT too and he really did seem to want her, but he lost her to Pucey in the end... Oh well, Hermione can't make every wizard happy. *grins* I did love her past (affair) relationship with Bill though. I mean if she's going to be with a Weasley, Bill's a hell of a better choice... Charlie too, and don't forget the twins - Ok, anyone is acceptable besides Ron, really :D

I also loved how you took the Pureblood!Hermione cliché and made it awesome. It's actually weird that I like Severus as Hermione's secret dad with me being a huge SSHG fan and all, but I really did love it in this and I adored the first real conversation between them when he got ‘back'. It was lovely and had me Aww-ing. Also the whole way you brought Severus back was really fantastic. The magic was simply fascinating and original too. Brilliant job with the twist of McGonagall being Hermione's grandmother as well! Neat idea! I thought Hermione's reactions to the news of true parentage and such (Severus being her father, McGonagall as her grandmother, McGonagall's daughter as her mother, the Grangers really being squibs and actually knowing of the Order, etc...) was really well done and very realistic.

I enjoyed Hermione's business partnership/friendship with Draco too. All their interactions were hilariously funny and I really liked the easy banter they had. I adored Draco's teasing and semi flirting. He really was a delightful side character in this. Actually all the Slytherins in this were lovely side characters. I especially liked Mille.

Anyhoo, this was a completely incredible story - I enjoyed it to bits and I will definitely being re-reading it in the future! Thank you so much for writing!!!

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Intrigue, passion, and mystery at it's finest. You have peaked my interest, and I thirst for more. Mmm hmm. So many questions you have sparked in the old grey matter.
Thank you, thank you for sharing~Elou

Author's Response: thank you for reviewing my lovely button!! xoxox I hopeyou enjoy chapter two!

Oh there it is!!! It is soooo good and Pucey is smoking hot!!!! I like where you divided it to create a nice little mystery. The magic is soooo cool and that is because you are so clever. Love you bunches, xoxoxoKel

Author's Response: I love you

Very interesting first chapter, I look forward to read more.

Author's Response: Why thank you my dearest! I hope you enjoy chapter two!

Another fabulous story that hopefully will be updated soon! I love where this is and could be going. So many great underused characters in your story. Happy to see them being written so well.

Author's Response: I promise to update...oh wait I already have LOL :D <3