Ohmygoodness!!!! >:( How dare you leave me hanging like that!!!! Its amazing but continue!!!! Please? Im sorry for being rude. I just want the rest. Please? Ill give you a cookie... well... if i had one... but you know what i mean! I absolutely loved it!! Its so twisted and confusing on a good level!!! I love it!! Im waiting patiently for the rest. Thanks! <3Reviewer: Ezkaremo Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/01/2013 - 08:40 pm
I have been most intrigued by this story, you have created a most interesting scenario, which I find to be.......hmmmmm .
At th end of the 3rd chapter your authors note stated that you would like comments and allowed us to ask questions that were relevant or interesting in one way or another, so here goes;
when are you going to get on with it woman and write some more of this wonderful story??Reviewer: furface294 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2013 - 08:14 pm
Omgggggg PLEASE UPDATE! I noticed there hasn't been a new chapter for a quite a while, and I implore you to please finish this. I am so intrigued by the world you've created. I do not tend to like LV/HG stories, but I really need more. Please. Please please please. I will review every single new chapter you post, multiple times if you'd like. I would love to see a new chapter soon. You have hooked me!Reviewer: Azurena Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/10/2012 - 11:48 pm
I am in love with this story, no joke. I love how powerful Hermione is, and how alluring the dark lord is, and lets not forget how the brooding mysterious snape. I have a feeling from all the hints that you dropped that Voldemort he has regained his old body, no longer snake-like but Handsome and dark and oh so delicious. I cant wait to read more, keep up the great work.Reviewer: DarkAngelLida Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/06/2012 - 05:33 pm
wow, just WOW... I read all five chapters today and I must say this has been such a fantastic read! I find your characters and their though processes very realistic, was especially impressed about the detail regarding the killing curse, have never thought about it in that way before! So interesting! I'm really excited to find out your reasons as to why Voldemort has an agenda against Muggleborns, really looking forward to the next chapter! Please update soon! :)Reviewer: RoseDarcy1993 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2012 - 09:45 am
LOOOOVE IT! Please do continue this story! XD I only just picked up reading and couldn't stop until I couldn't continue. ^_^ I'll figure out your riddle in a bit and see about an answer. :) I absolutely love this dark version of both Hermione and LV. And they're both believable too. I could totally see both being this way in the books and movies.Reviewer: phantomflame Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2012 - 09:08 pm
I found your story through the banner you posted in the Owl Post-- it was lovely and I'm always interested in LV/HG fics! Count me very impressed - with your gorgeous banner and very interesting story. The quality of your writing is uniformly excellent. I love Powerful!Hermione-- and I like seeing her wrestle with the moral vagaries of what makes something Dark. Am very much looking forward to seeing where you take this! Well done!Reviewer: Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/12/2011 - 02:13 pm
so i've just reread the whole story again as a holiday treat! although i'm sure the compliments are becoming repetitive, the plot, dialogue, character development are all fabulous! you've kept us guessing with an original and unique tale. this is my absolute favorite fanfic! i also feel compelled to point out how masterfully you've achieved a clever subtlety in character interactions and how delicately you've been unfolding the plot. These are marks of a truly accomplished writer and thank you so much for sharing with us! i hope you have a wonderful holiday!Reviewer: aislinggrey888 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/12/2011 - 06:49 pm
oooh what's going on? what is the reason? I hope you haven't abandoned this... I don't think it has been updated for a while but I really want to see where you go with this!
*smiles evilly* Oh yes! There's a lot of mystery in this story! Which I'm sure you've notice by now... *smirks*
Oh no - I'm DEFINITELY abandoning this tale! Ever! *practically faints at the mere idea of it* Though it's just five chapters in, I've already put so much thought into it, it would be a crime of nature to ever abandon it. You should see my story and chapter notes - I have a completely seperate folder with alphabetical charaterisation! Yep, I'm slightly insane it seems :)
Basically, right after I updated this story the last time, I landed myself a new job and before I knew it, was sucked into it entirely. The last four months have been hectic to say the least. However, I am finally starting to manage my free time sensibly! Just today managed to update one of my other stories and The Rise of the Dark Age is the next one on the list! *does a happy dance*
Therefore, have no fears! You will soon be seeing a brand new spanking chapter here! Just keep your eyes open ;)
I would like to thank you for your most lovely and enouraging reviews! They really mean a lot, and brought my confidence the boost it needed! Thank you very, very much )))))))
Looking forward to the chance of seeing what you would think of this story as it progresses!
Ms Velvela XDReviewer: lwalters5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2011 - 10:39 am
Draco's death killed me. Crying in front of my computer like a baby. Damn you Lucius. I think I quite like Narcissa though.
Ohhh, my dear... I'm really sorry that I made you cry *passes a tissue as a peace-offering* But then, there's a part of me that is tickled happily that the scene brought out such a reaction out of you. Have to confess: I wasn't completely dry-eyed myself when I was writing it :( The image of his dying was so clearly in front of me that it was unbearable.... *sniffs*
"I think I quite like Narcissa though" - it's good that you do! It's not the last time you'll be seeing her, trust me. She may not play a major role in this plot but her presence will play an influence in Hermione development.... hmmm... ))))Reviewer: lwalters5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2011 - 10:26 am
I love Snape. Is Lucius going to die soon?
Hehe. Snape is one of my other favourite characters. After reading DH, I came to the decision of never, EVER letting him die. He may not be the sweetest or the most handsome wizard, but he's the unsung hero who deserved so much more... and lets not forget his voice *shudders in pleasure* lol
"Is Lucius going to die soon?" - even though you already know the answer to that question, I have to say that in this case, I won't let his survive for very long! ))))))Reviewer: lwalters5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2011 - 10:11 am
those nightmares would be terrible. but how could she not lay all the blame on herself if she is the only one left alive? die Wormtail. you deserve nothing less. I was hoping she would wordlessly/wandlessly kill Pettigrew. that was mostly the case.
Being a detailed dreamer myself for all my life, I never considered nightmares to be the ones where you're chased by monsters or meeting the boogey man. It's the psychological ones that wound the most, and that's exactly what's happening to Hermione here. She has been abandoned with only her senseless blame for company, and it is literally eating her from inside out. But at the same time, there's a piece of her that wants to continue living, to continue getting knowledge - for in my opinion, whilst Harry was always ruled by his heart, Hermione is ruled foremost by her mind.
I got a perverse satisfaction at destroying Pettigrew once and for all. Ah, I'm joyous that I've been able to fulfill at least one of your wishes then! *evil cackle*
Onto the next one now! ;)Reviewer: lwalters5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2011 - 09:58 am
I love Hermione/Voldemort. I don't care how twisted it seems. I don't care. LOL. I'm very excited to read the rest.
Decided to answer your reviews in the "order" they came ))) Lol, I so understand what you mean concerning Hermione/Voldemort! There's just something about those two that raises the hairs along my body to attention. Two minds as vast as theirs, the potential between them is virtually limitless... It's great to know that the first chapter has grabbed your attention so much. Alright, I'm off now to your next reviews! *grins like a loon*Reviewer: lwalters5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2011 - 09:41 am
wow, what an amazing story! please update again soon!!!
Thank you very much, my dear! Your words come as a great enouragement to me ))) I will do my best to update as soon as possible, at least in the next two weeks! So keep your eyes open O-O .... lol.
Yours sincerely, Ms Velvela XDReviewer: jda5134 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/10/2011 - 12:09 am
Hoping that you update again soon!! This story has been rather interesting so far :)
Hey! Actually, I feel quite bad at not being able to have updated for so long... Since then I've been accepted at a new workplace and my time has been mostly consumed by it *sad sigh* However, I shall be trying my utmost best to better allocate my free time for writing! Promise ;) As soon as I update one of my other stories (in two days) I will get my head around the next chapter - the plot of The Rise of the Dark Age will need all of my attention ))) Thank you for leaving your review! xReviewer: Gabby0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2011 - 12:59 pm
I need more. you have to finish this soon!
Lol - your obvious enthusiasm is very appreciated! :) As soon as I update one of my other stories, I will start working on the next chapter of The Rise of the Dark Age (promise! *puppy eyes*) Thank you very much for your support, mandeemalfoy )))) xxxReviewer: mandeemalfoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2011 - 12:03 pm
im hooked !
Hehe - i'm delighted to hear (read?) that! *grins like a loon* Will start working on the next chapter very soon, promise. Thank you for leaving your review, I greatly appreciate it! XDReviewer: among_others Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2011 - 02:21 pm
I hope to find out Voldie'reasons very soon
I will throw in additional information with every chapter - but the whole picture will not be revealed until the end, I'm afraid! I'm a sucker for mysteries, and this story is my first attempt at trying my hand at writing it :) As soon as I complete 2nd chapter of Ultimate Experience part 2, I'm coming back to this one.
Thank you once more for your encouraging words, Glorip! Hope you will keep enjoying my stories ) xReviewer: Glorip Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/09/2011 - 02:50 am
Great story. Chilling, but great ;)
Lol :) It's great that you're finding it chilling in some ways, as that's one of the effects I was going for )) Thank you for your encouraging words! More to come, naturally.... ;) xReviewer: Alcarna Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2011 - 08:00 am
'All brands of magic are a precious knowledge. And knowledge is power. That is enough for me.'
That quote sent shivers down my spine. Well written and a refreshing take on Hermione exploring her 'dark' side. I am reminded of the Confessor from Legend Of The Seeker whenever Hermione envokes her judgement, the epitome of fairness, yet seeming dark compared to the optimism of the Light.
Anxious to see where Snape falls into this and anxious to watch Hermione's interactions with Voldemort!!
Loving it (if you couldn't tell) please update at your leisure, as long as that's soon!!
To tell you the truth, everything Voldemort utters send shivers down my back as well - it's like his quotes have a life of their own *glances around her fearfully* Lol. There's just so much potential in his character to explore, don't you think? The background, his motives...his mind? *gulps* I just hope I won't have to visit a psychatrist by the time this story is completed )))
I used to follow the Legend of the Seeker myself, actually! Though I just now realised that there's something similar between Hermione and the Confessor... Never even had a thought about that series when I was writing it - or was I working on a subconscious level? hmm.. interesting)) The theory of judgement always fascinated me in a way. Who's to say who's right or wrong? To know where lies the truth? I guess here is my attempt at creating a way that answers it all...in a way ;)
More scenes with Snape coming soon! And Hermione and the Dark Lord, naturally *smirks* I shall try my best at speeding up my updates! *fingers crossed*
Thank you very much for your words! They really mean a lot)))
Ms Velvela XDReviewer: dragontamer37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/08/2011 - 03:13 am
Crap. All my reviews are gone. Grrr...
I posted the other review on AFFnet because you had to repost your story there and lost all your reviews, and now this happened here. It's like the devil's at work or ... perhaps Dumbledore's Army? Evil redheads? Yeah, now we're getting to the true culprits. XD
However, it really irritates me when my reviews go haywire online because, and I'm not kidding, I swear it takes me a long time to write them because I like to go through a chapter, quote lines, point out what made me laugh, cry, etc.
And in your case, there was a lot to quote and to like.
Shoot. If I'd had them saved somewhere, I'd have reposted. Now I'm afraid you'll just have to do with the memory of it.
But I can say this: I absolutely love this story so far. So go write, write, write. I am impatiently waiting. Desperate for some good Tomione. There are far too few of those, and this is looking so incredibly promising, it makes me check for updates all the time.
dax or nerys, whatever you prefer. LOL.
PS. If you want to avoid having to clog up your chapters on AFFnet with review replies there, you can always PM your response to me here or on FFnet. *waves*
It's such a pleasure to see you around here again! )))
Ah, he loss of reviews... grrr... I keep going on how awesome and convenient the creation of cyberspace was, but at times it's simply one big pain in the arse *pouts*! DA? Most probably – they're one shifty lots! Especially the Weasleys!!! I tend to stay away from the natural redheads nowadays *smirks*
I do have to say, though, that this story is my favourite one to write out of all my ongoing WIPs! It sprang from a random theory of Hermione/Voldemort pairing and grew into an absolute devotion of this particular genre. Since than I've been hunting through all fanfictions available for stories likes these but unfortunately there are just not a lot of them out there *grumbles* Seriously, we should organize a club (between you, Serpent and me) for Tom's fans. It's a blasphemy that there are so few stories to go around! *drop down notes for the "VOTE FOR THE DARK LORD" poster*
I love replying to such amazing and ecouraging reviews like yours so much that I will write you a seperate review response for the one on AFF.net! Hey, if it keeps my muse going I'm all up for that! *evil smile*
Thank you, thank you, dax/Nerys!! (haha - I still cannot decide which name of yours I like the most - both are equally mesmerising ;) )
P.S. You've updated the Prisoner!!! *squeals and faints* Seriously though, I doubt I would have had any better news than that on a Saturday morning! I haven't read it yet, but I'm planning to in a couple of hours...as soon as I have a glass of wine at the ready and your story on my screen *sighs in enjoyment* )))) xxx
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Date: 18/08/2011 - 02:04 pm