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Reviewer: Amelia Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2010 - 09:10 pm Title: The Boy

 Please update soon! I can't wait for more

Reviewer: Serpent Queen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/07/2010 - 01:45 pm Title: Prologue

AH the lovelyness of this story hits me again. So you should let it hit you and start writing again!

Reviewer: apkblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/07/2010 - 05:40 am Title: The Boy

Just revisiting this story *again*, so beautifully written, so powerfully done.  I'd recommended it recently to someone also writing a story dealing with the aftermath of torture, and felt compelled to read it one more time.

So very hopeful that it's not being abandoned.  It's way too good to lose.  Sending some virtual-chocolate to your muse, just for a little pick-me-up ... 

Reviewer: Serpent Queen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2010 - 06:23 pm Title: Prologue

Update!!!!

Please... I want want want you to update. It could even be a tiny one. Just something to let me know you still love us enough to keep writing... lol.

Reviewer: Ellie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2010 - 02:08 pm Title: The Boy

  I hope this fic will be updated.  I want to see Hermione get better.  I just don't want her to be left like this.  Glad Teddy came over to visit.:)

Reviewer: Serpent Queen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/03/2010 - 04:43 pm Title: Prologue

Please please please update this one. I'll love you forever and ever and ever.

Reviewer: rox4787 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2010 - 09:10 pm Title: The Boy

love it please update soon

Reviewer: Serpent Queen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/02/2010 - 01:53 am Title: Prologue

You better not be abandoning this story.

Reviewer: Serpent Queen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2010 - 01:21 am Title: Prologue

This is me... This is me begging for an update... Yes, I'm pitiful.

Reviewer: Roadkill2580 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2010 - 07:55 pm Title: Prologue

I think one of the best things I like about this story is that the details of Hermione's torture aren't clear. In her own thoughts, she hints at them, so we all know what she went through, but we don't know exactly. Does that make sense? This is a torture recovery story that I find is tastefully done. Mostly its, scream for two chapters, have smex, and bam, happily ever after. Your pacing makes it clear it won't be the same. I just want to somehow appear (maybe magically?) in the story and hug Hermione and tell her its all right. I can really feel Sirius' support, and his calm presence, as well as a sense of his own haunted past. I also like how Harry and Ginny really try their best, but unwittingly just make things worse. Your story is extraordinary, and I can't wait for the next update. Brilliant!

Reviewer: Serpent Queen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2010 - 05:02 am Title: The Boy

Teddy is so sweet. I hope you update soon... Like in 3 days which is what happened last time I requested an update... lol. Anywho I realllllly like this story so PLEASE keep updating it...

Or I may have to become a creepy stalker and break your legs and force you to write, like that one creepy movie with Kathy Bates in it, Misery.

None of us want that...

Lol.

Reviewer: oufan Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/11/2009 - 08:23 pm Title: The Boy

I hope you haven't abandoned this story!!!  I really liked it.  And normally I am not a big Sirius/Hermione fan.

Reviewer: crysta656 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2009 - 03:59 pm Title: The Boy

Wow! I'm blown away by this story. The emotion and the memories she has are just... unbelievable. You have done a fantastic job!

Reviewer: heartslonelyhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2009 - 12:57 pm Title: Prologue

OMG!! I'm loving this story its so well written and I know everyone is saying that but it is true!! Please update soon!

Reviewer: la_rubinita Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/10/2009 - 10:05 am Title: The Boy

Gah!  Sorry it took me so long to review.  RL's been kicking my butt lately.  Another amazing chapter :D  Kids have that effect on people, and I was thrilled that Remus made an appearance.  Of all the characters that bit the big one in DH, I was the most upset about him.  Looking forward to an update!

Reviewer: zavalan Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/10/2009 - 03:40 pm Title: The Ring

Oh wow. Poor Hermione :(

Reviewer: LadyDarkling Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/10/2009 - 12:52 am Title: The Boy

Oh, that was beautiful. Such a lovely way to help bring Hermione slowly out of her shell. It tugged at the heartstrings.

Reviewer: makaem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/10/2009 - 04:14 pm Title: The Boy

I love your story, although you had me in tears in places.

Reviewer: SezLa Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/10/2009 - 02:20 pm Title: The Boy

I'm not usually one to comment, but I really adore this story. Excellent work!

Reviewer: gregor Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/10/2009 - 11:38 am Title: The Boy

The pacing is perfect.  Will you be getting into what happened to Sirius that makes him so perfectly able to understand her situation?  I could see it working either way, just curious.

Reviewer: monami Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/10/2009 - 09:36 pm Title: The Boy

Another great chapter.  I am happy that Hermione found something good (a nice memory from her childhood) and no fear.  The poor girl needs some "niceness" in her life.

Reviewer: vamp1987 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/10/2009 - 05:11 pm Title: The Boy

Aw, Teddy's helping! He is always so cute! I think his laughter will help heal some of the hurt while Sirius tries to make her feel safe again.

Great story about struggle and survival.

Reviewer: WiccaWitch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/10/2009 - 08:39 am Title: The Boy

This chapter made me giggle a few times.  It was so light and airy.  The exuberance of Teddy is refreshing.  I think the light of a child can heal even the ost damaged people.

just curious...why purple?  My favorite colour too, so just wondering why you chose it?

 

Reviewer: HiddenDepths Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/10/2009 - 03:28 am Title: The Boy

All I can say is "wow"... I love how you can take the reader through Hermione's pain.  Good psycho work =] I love it! and can't wait until you update :) :) :)

Reviewer: Sampdoria Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/10/2009 - 03:16 am Title: The Boy

I am so happy to see the update, I am so hooked on this story, wanting for Hermione to have a future and heal some of her pain. Teddy is adorable, you did a grand job with him, and for all that Remus didn't know what to say, he did the rigth thing; he didn't try to fawn all over her, but let her have some distance and his words were perfect in my view. Sirius does of course get a large amount of stars for being Sirius, bringing her the clothes gave him a very large star in my book.

Reviewer: apkblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/10/2009 - 11:58 pm Title: The Boy

Once again, you've totally put me in Hermione's head.  You make it so easy to feel frightened, uncomfortable, nervous, jumpy ... and to see the happy little boy bouncing around, totally oblivious to her discomfort and hesitation ...

Once again, beautifully written, and the momentum is steady.  Great story.  As usual, just barely holding on for your updates ...

 

Reviewer: Ellie Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/10/2009 - 10:27 pm Title: The Boy

  That was a lovely afternoon.  I'm glad Teddy, Remus and Sirius were there.  I hope The Lupins can keep Hermione's presence at Grimmauld to themselves.  I think she definitely needs more time.  And Molly will certainly smother her if she knows where to find her.

  Thanks for the new chapter!

-Ellie

Reviewer: DHLane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/10/2009 - 10:20 pm Title: The Boy

Oh wow!!! I adore the interaction between Hermione and Teddy. He is guileless and wonderful. Sirius is better than he has to be and Hermione is so brave. Truly a Gryffindor. The writing is stellar and I look forward to the next chapter. :-) Kel

Reviewer: oufan Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/10/2009 - 09:17 pm Title: The Boy

MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: dracois4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/10/2009 - 08:29 pm Title: The Boy

what a sad chapter, she has lost so much, yet Teddy just opens her, sad and sweet

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