OMG I can't believe I didn't review this--though I read it like three times! You know my love of dark!Harry so I'm almost kissing your feet now (I have an aversion to feet, so you're out of luck). I'll sit sit patiently in the corner until Harry is finished with her, then he can turn the snakes on me and make it a night for me to never forget...dammit!Reviewer: Lupinswolfie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2008 - 12:13 pm
Ooh, dark Harry?
When you described his pale hands, for a second I thought it was Snape. Then the snake bit threw me off.
I wonder how he managed to get her naked and tied up in a dark bedroom without her figuring out who it was! Quite a different approach, but interesting to read nonetheless!
Date: 06/05/2008 - 09:20 am
The sex was hot, but the guy didn't seem very Harry-ish? I don't mean OOC per se, but his dialog seemed off? e.g. says "frumpy" and "know-it-all" out loud. No offense? (peeks through hands)
Author's Response: well it wouldn't have been the same if he had been moaning about how unfair his life was would it :D
Date: 05/05/2008 - 10:54 pm